他的求職信有沒有問題?

有網友世侄某甲, 上年六月副學士畢業, 今天寄出了他的第一千封求職信, 但別說找到一份長工, 見工次數也少得可憐. 雖然說他只靠jobsdb之類, 沒靠過人事關係, 但失敗率之高, 令他想到問題可能出在求職信當中. 現在我徵得他同意, 公開他的求職信給這裡一眾職場朋友過目, 看各位能否幫他的忙, 令他比較容易見到工, 直到上班.

以下是他的求職信:

I am writing for applying for the position of the
Customer Service Officer which is advertised in
Career Times at 28 February, 2006. I am currently
a student of English for International Corporate
Communication at City University of Hong Kong.

As a leading international airliner that focus on the human
relations, I believe that if working as a customer service
officer in your airline may help the company to become a
more successful and hence will help to promote Hong Kong a
s a destination of traveller around the world.

As I have been worked as a shopkeeper, I understand and known
about how to dealing with customer and have experience in some
of the unexpected situation. Also, as a have studied in English
and Japanese during my university study I will able to communicate
not just only the customer in English speaking countries,
I will able to help the Japanese customer.

I am enclosing my full resume for your reference. And I am looking
forward to hear from you and to being granted the opportunity of an
interview.



以下是他的resume:

EDUCATIONAL QUALIFICATIONS

2005 – 2006 B.A. (Hons) English of International Corporate Communication

University of Central Lancashire / City University of Hong Kong

- Concern on various types of Business English and Western Culture when using English in Business Sector

2003 – 2005 XXXXXX, City University of Hong Kong

- Concern on Japanese Language and Japanese culture.

1994 – 2002 Shatin XXXX Secondary School, F.1 to F.7

PROFESSIONAL CERTIFICATIONS

2006 Certificate of Japanese Proficiency Test, Level 2

2006 Outbound Tour Escort Certificate

EXTRA-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES

2004 Student Helper of International Symposium on Japanese Studies and Japanese Language Education

- Helping foreign guests in guiding to the conference rooms and facilitates communications between the guest and the local staff.

2000 – 2001 Vice President of House Committee

- Leading several project teams to hold sports and arts functions (with intense communication with people).

- Developed leadership in helping people to achieve goal within deadline.

AWARD

2005 Final Year Project Award

- By Associate of Arts, Applied Japanese Studies in City University of Hong Kong to dedicate the excellence in the final year project

SKILLS

Computer Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint

Typing English 25 wpm, Japanese 30 wpm, Chinese 20 wpm

Language Cantonese, English, Japanese, Mandarin

INTEREST

Reading, Travelling

Expected salary

Negotiable

Date of Available

Immediate